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Good Feeling

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I love to shoot impression instead of sights when I'm on journeys. What would be a better impression of Italy than a Vespa?

Nikon D700 with AF-D Nikkor 50 mm f/1.4
Brescia, Italy
Image size
4256x2832px 5.81 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
1/3200 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Apr 2, 2012, 10:49:17 AM
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AkdC's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Let me get this straight to you: FANTASTIC!

Well, almost.

This is just a simple photograph, but it makes a strikingly good impression to me!
The subject is highlighted correctly (which means the camera focus was good), and the background blurred behind your subject.
Another thing to point out is the use of vantage point/diminishing point. It gave an illusion to any viewer right now.

However, there are flaws still to your photograph.
First, there is/was an obstruction in front of your subject. If this was intentionally done, in my opinion this ruined the subject for a bit.

Another is that I think I'm seeing other unnecessary objects focused (or was it just me? My, I have to buy a pair of glasses). This distracts other viewers from looking to your principal subject.

All in all, I would have given you a 5 out of 5 but then, 4 out of 5 would do.

I hope I helped you!
~The Fire Stirring Ruby